Whaaa?
A tornado. Not funny. Suspecting it was a tornado. Now, for some reason it seems funny. And then, of course, we have to make sure that there is no doubt about this being the work of a suspected tornado. Just the idea seems odd. Suspecting a tornado.
By now you've seen what stuck out to me. While only used twice, rather thrice, it seems like "suspect" is the word of the day. I suggest we re-write it as follows:
Suspected Twister Causes Damage in VA (the state, not hospital)
Danville, VA-A suspected tornado caused widespread damage in this Virginia city. Officials report this.
While suspected, and expected, no injuries were reported. (At least none were detected.)
A spokeswoman for the state's Dept. of Emergency Services, after listing damages incurred during the storm, said," We suspect it was a tornado." However, A. Tornado could not be reached for comment.
While no arrests have been made, authorities seek Mr. Tornado, and a wEarl Wind for questioning. A search of a suspected trailer park has yielded no suspects.
"We suspect that they'll come around here," says one authority," and when they do, we'll .... hell, I'm not sure."
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